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There are rivers where there once was concrete and grass and trees.  You’d never think a place, within a prairie within a cornfield, would be so slanted.  But rivers flow just the same.

Leaves swirl within them as I pull my hood down to block out the rain.

Big, heavy, cold drops.

I want to take my shoes and throw them away.  I want to soak up to my ankles in the cold, rapid current.  I want to hop on a leaf and see where it takes me.  Fight the rapids around the storm drains and find a new time, a new place.

I want to leap and sail across rivers; like the explorers of old books gathering dust.  Sail the ocean where we picnicked before and discover land on the other side.

I’ll claim it in the name of Traditional Grammar and Deviant Behavior.  I’ll start a glorious civilization; we’ll live for eternity and be corrupted by our own greed.

A mouse on his bark canoe rushes past me on that swirling river –batting his tail on his leafy mates.  He sails past for adventures I’ll never have the nerve to see.

I salute to his health and his journey, and then push past the rivers to the hall.
©2008-2009 =LizardPie
:iconlizardpie:

Author's Comments

I don't necessarily know if I'll do more of these (I tend to drop projects out of laziness), I just don't want to name it.

Once again, they don't have the form I want them to have. It's a prose poem.

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:iconm-sama:
:3 I like this.

>:3 what kind of deviant behavior?

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NOT GOING TO SLEEP FOR A WHILE?
:iconlizardpie:
XD; The best kind.

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head pillowed on my arm
such affection for myself
and this smoky moon
- Yosa Buson
:iconcyan-icewolf:
You should do more like these. I like it so much it inspired me... now just have to get off my lazy butt and write more myself.
:iconlizardpie:
I have been slacking off on my poetry, I'll try to get back to it.

Thank you for the lovely comment and fav. I'd love to see whatever this inspires!

--
head pillowed on my arm
such affection for myself
and this smoky moon
- Yosa Buson
:iconlizardpie:
?

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head pillowed on my arm
such affection for myself
and this smoky moon
- Yosa Buson
:iconbangxanadigital:
how do you add like a lititure thing?
:iconlizardpie:
On the submission page, copy/paste into 'add text'. That way, you don't have to put up a display image.

--
head pillowed on my arm
such affection for myself
and this smoky moon
- Yosa Buson
:iconbangxanadigital:
ok thanks I'll try that
:iconlizardpie:
^_^ Welcome.

--
head pillowed on my arm
such affection for myself
and this smoky moon
- Yosa Buson

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